Wednesday, November 21, 2012

The Morning After



The grating sound of shrill beeping shattered the silence, reverberating off the corrugated metal walls of the narrow, dimly lit room. He awoke with a start, fumbling with the buttons of his Diver’s Timex. 

            “Six-thirty” he groaned, “Time to start a new era.” 

            The weary man ran fingers through his hair as he gazed at the sleeping form of his beloved wife. It had been a rough couple of days for all of them, most especially her, but it was time to awaken to a new day and a new way of living. 

            Wake up sleepy head … I’ll go roust the kids.”

            His eleven year old son shot up like a rocket, but such could not be said for his daughter, six years young and cranky when stirred. 

            He propped her up in the cot, attempting to ease her into consciousness, to which she responded with a gentle descent back to her pillow. 

            “Just a few more minutes Daddy.”

            “C’mon sweetheart, Mommy needs your help in the kitchen.”

            O-kaaay.”

            Young Daniel was invigorated by the prospects of this new morning, brushing his teeth, combing his hair and dressing in record time. His father watched proudly, enthusiastically timing him with his stopwatch. 

            “Well done Danny, one minute, twenty-two seconds!”

            Suddenly, Clarissa became inspired, leaping into her jumper, strategically draped over a nearby side chair the night before.

            “Show off” Danny exclaimed.

            The young family gathered around a metal dinette set in an adjacent chamber as Dad gave assignments to each member. 

            “Honey, why don’t you whip us up some breakfast while I hook up the topside cable and antennas? Danny, you and Clarissa check the gear.”

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            Their breakfast of bacon and fresh eggs never tasted so good, a sensation enhanced no doubt, by the distinct possibility that it may be a long time coming before the next such feast. Powdered eggs, though bearable, were a poor substitute for the real thing as was the freeze dried bacon-jerky stored in abundance within the well-packed pantry. 
            Danny ceaselessly scrolled the frequency dial of the compact radio atop the dinette table, searching for signs of anything unusual. 

            “Same old stuff Dad, maybe we missed it.”

            Danny’s father exchanged a wry smile with his wife. “Now don’t believe everything you hear … or don’t hear son, most of those stations are on autopilot, everything’s recorded. We’ll be finding out soon enough.”

            “Well, I’m ready Dad, how about you?”

            Clarissa cried out, “Me too … I wanna go!”

            He knelt beside his daughter’s chair, softly brushing her cheek. “No no sweetie, you help your mommy check the TV stations, Danny and I will look outside.”

            O-kaaay.”

            The pair maneuvered through the tight maze of steel cubicles, stopping at a wooden armoire near the exit.

            “Put your mask on son, and make sure it’s sealed around the collar.”

            The man retrieved an M4 rifle from the cabinet and turned toward the welded-rebar egress ladder then paused. “Uh, Danny … you forgetting something?”

            “Oh yeah …” The young man eagerly grabbed the 30 ought.

            “No … the Mossberg!” He lightly slapped the side of his magazine. “Remember, assault rifle for general-purpose, shotgun for close encounters. Don’t be forgetting your training at a time like this son.”

            “Sorry Dad …”

            He gave the boy a reassuring hug. “That’s okay buddy … now, let’s go have a look at day one!”

            The pair emerged through a hatch, discreetly hidden within the mock tool shed in their back yard. Poised at the door, the duo prepared to greet the new age with a hope and a promise, not to mention an ample supply of ammunition. 

            With Danny bringing up the rear, his father burst through the door, assuming a battle stance! To their great surprise, the homes were still standing, the sky was still blue and their neighbor, Phillip Jenkins was standing still, motionless behind his sputtering mower and gawking … at them.

            Not daring to spook the well-armed pair, he eyeballed the father and son, adorned head to toe in their camouflaged combat regalia. Must be another drill, he thought. 

            Danny pulled off his gas mask, waving a khaki arm enthusiastically. “Hey Mr. Jenkins!”

            Phillip stood dumbfounded, his mouth agape with befuddlement. Recovering from his stupor, he managed to raise a hand, wriggling his fingers in response, then added a weak smile before cautiously returning to his labors. Jenkins shook his head in disgust as he rounded the corner, disappearing out of sight. At least he didn’t set off that obnoxious siren again.

            Crouching low, the father and son team darted from bush to hedge along the side yard, periodically popping their heads up for a quick reconnoiter of the neighborhood …nothing, absolutely nothing had changed!

            Undaunted, they stealthily made their way back to the shed, returning to deliver their report.

            “Anything over the airwaves honey? It’s situation normal above ground!”

            She shook her head. “Not a thing baby, I think we may have dodged the bullet.”

            “Nah, it can’t be. This is the day after; we allowed plenty of wiggle room for all the time zones. I just can’t understand it.”

            His loving wife pulled him close, cradling his cheek against her neck to console him. “Well hey …” she said. “Everything’s O-K, that’s a good thing isn’t it!?”

            He gazed at the painted metal floor brooding, not yet ready to surrender to reality. “Well of course it’s good that the planet hasn’t suffered mass destruction on a global scale unlike anything witnessed by the whole of humanity, but then again, I was kinda looking forward to a fresh start.”

            He wrestled with the chaos of lingering doubt for several moments until reason regained a foothold, driving him to revive his determination. “NO, too many people agreed … today IS the day!”

            She massaged her brow, trying to think. “Maybe it’s some kind of, I don’t know … reverse Rapture. Could it be that only the righteous remain!?”

            Her husband shook his head. “Nah, Phil’s still around, we just spotted him from the backyard and I’m pretty sure I saw Jack’s wife rifling through boxes in her garage.”

            His wife nodded wholeheartedly, acknowledging her husband’s moral assessment.

            “Well, I wouldn’t let it upset you honey, there’s never a bad time to be prepared. Who knows what tomorrow may bring?”

            “It’s not tomorrow that worries me babe.”

            “Well what is it?”

            He paced the makeshift kitchen floor obsessing. “For starters, there’s only three more shopping days till Christmas and I haven’t bought a thing! It was hard enough convincing the kids that we didn’t need a tree this year but now ... they’ll be expecting presents just like the rest of their friends.”

            The couple scanned the seemingly endless rows of vacuum sealed canning jars, dry goods and Mylar packets of meals ready to eat. So much planning, so much preparation, had it all been for naught? 

            Suddenly, something occurred to him, an avenue he had not yet explored. In an instant he ran to the laptop, quickly going online to fire up his search engine with renewed vigor. 

            His fingers raced across the keyboard, then he hit enter. Not finding the object of his desire, he tried different keywords. Again and again he maniacally plied the engine for answers.

            Baffled by her husband’s newfound enthusiasm, she leaned close, peering over his shoulder. 

            “What are you looking for babe?”

            With his eyes ablaze and hands trembling ever so slightly, he turned to her with a beaming smile. 

            “I’m wondering whether the Incans might have had a calendar too!!”

19 comments:



  1. “Just a few more minutes Daddy.”

    THAT'S A PRETTY ARTICULATE 6 YEAR OLD.




    Young Daniel was invigorated by the prospects of this new morning, dressing and brushing his hair in record time. His father watched proudly, timing him with the stopwatch function of his Timex.

    BRUSHING HIS HAIR? DUDE, THIS FAMILY IS WELL GROOMED...





    With Danny bringing up the rear, his father burst through the door, assuming a battle stance! To their surprise, the homes were still standing, the sky was still blue and their neighbor, Phillip Jenkins was standing still, motionless behind his sputtering mower and gawking … at them.

    AWW, THIS IS EMBARRESSING, THE APOCALYPSE DIDN'T HAPPEN AGAIN ...




    Her husband shook his head. “Nah, Phil’s still around, we just spotted him from the backyard and I’m pretty sure I saw Jack’s wife rifling through boxes in her garage.”

    YEAH, PHIL'S A DICK!



    COOL LITTLE PIECE, 'dULA. WONDER WHY THIS GUY HAS SUCH A BONER FOR THE APOCALYPSE.

    DON'T GET ME WRONG, I'VE PLAYED FALLOUT: NEW VEGAS, I GET. THE POST APOC IS AWESOME.

    BUT A FRESH START? SOUNDS LIKE A HASSEL.

    LOVE THE SUPPORTING WIFE IN ALL OF THIS.



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  2. Wow Scott,

    First trip to your blog! Cute story but to tell you the truth...the way things are going in this world now, I'm not so sure that I want to prepare for the Apocalypse. I think if there's an alternative, I'd rather prepare for the Rapture. I don't think I could imagine anyone looking so forward to the end of this world.

    Love the story though...keep up the good work! Blessings and I just want to be able to get through Thanksgiving...who knows when we'll have another such good feast.

    Always, Cate

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  3. Rooster,
    Thanks for the read. I guess I was lamenting our lack of Nat Geo channel, (downgraded our package), as I watched a commercial for DP and was inspired. Hey , what's the point of Global Catastrophe anyway if you can't have a little fun with it?

    To be honest, I think that's why post-apoc is so popular these days, the chance at pressing the reset button and clearing the slate. Of course, it's all fun and games until you realize that you might not be one of the survivors!!
    Start digging that bunker my friend...Writer Nation MUST survive!

    Happy Thanksgiving,
    Abdula

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    1. hey man, that's what netflix is for...

      I get what you're saying about the fresh start, it would be cool to start up a new goverment from scratch.

      I don't have a lot of problems with the one I have, but it would be interesting to build one.

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  4. Cate,
    Now that's a distinct possibility, maybe there was a rapture and the family was ... Left Behind!?!?
    Hmmm, food for thought. And speaking of food,
    Happy Thanksgiving to you too!

    Now that you mention it, I think the Aztecs might have predicted Doomsday: Nov.24!

    Hope to hear from you again...from ANYONE soon!

    Scott

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  5. Preparing for disaster is good but should be done in moderation. The father was an extremist but he is not alone. Many people are like him.

    One of the best ways to prepare is to gain a particular set of skills that can be used when things go wrong. The right skills can never run out like goods.



    This was nice I loved the ending.

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  6. A very good story! It made me laugh!
    Keep up the good work!
    Tahdas from writer nation.

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    1. Also this dude sounds like me if I had money!

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  7. Jaja,
    I'm with you about maintaining basic skill sets. That's the focus of Casey's approach in Aftertime, understand how things work and how people behave and you've got it licked.
    I've got to admit though ...I'd love to have a subterranean bunker! There's something about having a secret place that no one suspects is there...

    Thanks for the read and nice work w/Russell 9!

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  8. David,
    Nice to hear from you! I was going to send you a PM through WB to see if you'd like your blog link to feature "Tahdas" or another name. Also, I couldn't find your http, I think Rooster sent it in an email. Will check tomorrow.

    Thanks for the read, this one was just for fun but I may give humor another shot down the road.

    Keep an eye out for that PM,
    Scott

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  9. Hello, just wanted to tell you I'm starting Highwaymen. Very nice Blog page title Surrealistic Pillowtalk btw. Check for my feedback soon. ;-)

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  10. Hey Scott,

    I finally found the time to return-read your blog, and chose this story. Very enjoyable, and great premise! I actually felt bad for the guy, he seemed to be looking forward to the End so much.

    Would you consider republishing this on The Story Shack? I'd love to help getting it out there, and it's great illustration material. Please send me an e-mail on writer@thestoryshack.com if you're interested.

    Happy New Year!

    Cheers,
    Martin

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  11. Niyah,
    Thanks for stopping by, I'm just now catching up on my correspondence. I'll be seeing you soon in the pages of "the Blovel" once I finish editing the conclusion to Hwymn.

    See you there,
    Scott

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  12. Martin,
    Looking forward to the prospect of working with you and yours. Sorry that I haven't been by in awhile but I plan to very soon. I guess it's "good" that I'm that busy!

    Thanks Again,
    Scott

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  13. "The grating sound of shrill beeping shattered the silence, reverberating off the corrugated metal walls of the narrow, dimly lit room. He awoke with a start, fumbling with the buttons of his Diver’s Timex."

    Dope opening and word play!!!!!!!

    Your story telling skills are very impressive. I enjoyed the short read. The dialogue is natural and I can hear the sound of the voices as they talk. The way you painted the picture of their family life is awesome.

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  14. Niyah,
    Thanks for the good words. I tried to play out the family life as classic "Leave it to Beaver" to mask the darker purpose of their little cottage underground.

    Hey, Doomsday Preppers are people too ...

    Glad to see you on my pages Niyah,
    Scott

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  15. This was a fun story.

    I agree with you, I'd love to have a subterranean bunker, and the ultimate test would be to see if you could survive after everyone else was gone.

    I mean, I wouldn't want it to happen, but I would be curious to find out if I was prepared for it.

    Finally getting around to reading more of your stuff, and loving it!
    Jim

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  16. Jim,
    I hear you, when I was living down in Florida, I'd wrestle with my feelings every time hurricane season would roll around.

    On the one hand,I never wanted anyone to get hurt or suffer but on the other, I secretly wished that the storm would level the place. I guess subconsciously, every man wants the opportunity to test his mettle in an apocalyptic scenario to see if he has the right stuff.

    Thanks again Jim, I'm glad that I still have your several of your works to keep me occupied and entertained for some time to come.
    Scott

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  17. So I gather you wrote this story based on 'Doomsday Preppers'?
    We have that strange sub-culture here too, though they seem to prepare for a civil war of some kind.
    Good luck to them.

    Very entertaining story story.

    Blessings,
    Judith

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