Monday, November 12, 2012

The Kensington Vault





            Elias raced through the streets, determined to arrive at the ICU to speak with his aged mentor one last time. The pair was part of a decades-old consortium dedicated solely to the resolution of the greatest puzzle made by human hands.
            The Kensington Vault had been known through the ages as a contraption of unparalleled mechanical mastery. Buried deep below the blue-blooded estate was what promised to be the very essence of infinite knowledge. Rumor had it that the original patriarch had discovered endless tomes hidden beneath an Egyptian temple while serving in the crusades. He realized the forgotten cache was none other than the treasure of the library in nearby Alexandria. Quietly spiriting the find back to England, he constructed this marvel to house its wonders.
            Prospering greatly in all manner of human endeavors, the Kensingtons maintained only one stipulation be passed on to the next generation, every man must have access to these riches as long as he rightly answers but one question: “Do you know the way to enter?”
            Dutifully passed on through only the heirs, just one answer would suffice. As reward for their diligently maintaining the repository, they were given free admittance, their success a testament to its enormous value. Throughout the centuries, only three besides family had ever conquered the riddle, and none of them applied it correctly to open the cryptic locks. For but five small levers were what separated any man from sharing what was traditionally reserved to only the direct Kensington line. These were what separated belief from knowing, for many men knew the words of truth but not the essence of what they meant.
            Elias burst through the doors, then rushed to join Jacob at his bedside. He had suffered a stroke of both good and bad fortune, the latter in the form of a blood clot in the brain. In his office, an epiphany came as he rifled through his papers, and the resultant excitement threatened to rob him of his just reward. Barely able to speak, he removed the tethered mask and pulled Elias closer still.
            Tears welled in both of their eyes but Jacob had to speak, for he felt death at the very door. “A … Bottle,” he gasped. “… message … in … A Bottle.”  He stared back at his young protégé, desperately hoping for some sign of recognition. There was none, only concern for his aged friend’s well-being. Jacob’s face became a twisted grimace as his life began to recede. With but one breath left within him, he chose his last word wisely, saying only “Delaney...” then he died.
            Elias paced the room frantically, attempting to measure grief against his duty to respectfully honor the fallen comrade’s wishes. If only they had more time. Clearly, many gaps to his brief utterance needed filling, for what had metaphorical bottles to do with the work of a cryptographer? “Message” seemed more in line with their field, but the name “Delaney” made no sense at all.
            Now at home, the pacing resumed, driven by this nagging sense that Jacob’s dying words rang bells in his memory, but their exact location continued to elude him. Armed with Google and a pair of crossed fingers, he entered Bottle+Delaney. Immediately, the connection to the estate was made clear, “A Bottle” was the name of an obscure piece of prose contained in the Kensington Archive.
            Several commentaries revealed that an ongoing controversy surrounded this single page of unremarkable literature. The piece wasn’t totally devoid of merit, but what gave many pause was its peculiar placement with the other notable selections. This archive was unique in that it featured no other literary works; rather, the collection was comprised solely of reflections of themaster’s thoughts on the subject of their works.
            Guttenberg’s scribblings, Newton’s doodles, along with DaVinci and Luther’s vellum post-its, the list spanned the greatest of all manner of thinkers, the latest from the current Lord himself.
            It was essentially a lament to the diminishing depth of the collective consciousness, which he believed had become rampant in the modern era. Kensington mourned a spray-cheese society encouraging insipid communication through blurbs of sound-bite texting. Mankind had become so enamored with living out loud that it had forgotten the allure of silent reflection and the monumental insights gained from listening within. People had little interest in unearthing a mystery through the classic means, preferring instant gratification over thoughtful sequential reasoning.
            This rabid impatience is what eventually drove him to acquiesce to the detractor’s demands regarding the inclusion of A Bottle amongst such noble works. Legend had it that the unexceptional piece had been written by the original founder himself, though there was no signature to confirm it. And this is where the keyword Delaney came into play.
            The current lord vehemently denied their insistence for removal, instead offering a compromise. In a bid to pacify their desire for the author’s notable pedigree, Lord William simply submitted a name … Byron Charles Delaney.
            The intellectual elite were enraged by his temerity, believing that the good lord so trivialized their valid concerns that he’d resort to practical jokes in response to an earnest request. A “Byron Delaney” never existed; at least not one sufficiently accomplished to fill their requirement.
            Unapologetic, Lord William never spoke again on the matter, and from Elias’ perspective that seemed to be the end of it. So why was it that this odd academic drama managed to capture the attention of so great a mind as Jacob’s?
            In his youth, Jacob had been privileged to be at the forefront of cryptanalysis as one of the legendary Boys from Bletchley Park. It had been their sole task to crack the code of Hitler’s Enigma machine and all of its possible permutations. Praised by Churchill and lauded by history, Jacob’s future was assured as his post-war assignment turned from the battle with fascism to the struggle for enlightenment.
            Ever pragmatic, the consummate strategist would view his impending death in practical terms. Given the devotion to his chosen profession, he wouldn’t waste precious breath on trivial platitudes. If Jacob Greene pointed a verbal finger at his deathbed, only a fool would dismiss it as fevered ramblings.
            Elias studied the straightforward piece of prose in the hopes of sharing his mentor’s vision. Surprisingly, the selection was quite well written, presenting a delightful cadence that rose and fell with the words that mirrored that sentiment. With highs and lows, ups and downs, the author described a castaway’s fluctuating mood as well as impressions of undulating waves tossing “a bottle” about, just beyond the shoreline. The marooned seaman wrestled with the notion of retrieving the glass vessel from the shark-infested waters, to his peril. Ultimately, the desire for contact outweighed his fears as he braved the brine victoriously.
            In an unexpected twist, the contents surpassed his hopes; the bottle was full of fresh water! The obvious moral was that when seeking to know … the gift of life was the reward.
            The following day, Elias set about the task of compiling Jacob’s notes for further study and posterity. Strewn across the floor was likely his most recent research, scattered when stricken by the fateful blow the night before. Elias was familiar with most of the work which consisted of detailed diagrams of the entry mechanism, as well as historical anecdotes on the vault’s construction.
            What drew his eye were the personal notes Jacob had jotted on common scratch paper. As important to discovery as any bound volume, Elias carefully collected the sheets with reverence. A curious sequence emerged from the pages, a type of progressive revelation to an ultimate conclusion. The focus began with the title A Bottle circled lazily in pencil. A winding arrow traced down below it where the name of the author was written. Elias could tell by the strokes that Jacob circled this entry slowly at first but continued with increasing force and speed. The final passes began to gouge the paper until abruptly ending with a snap of the lead.
            It was then that Jacob apparently saw what he sought, for fresh pencil marks reflected tenderness as the first letters of each name were gently circled, B … C then D. Immediately Elias could sense that an intellectual bridge had been gapped within him like the sound of a lock’s tumbler clicking though the safe was still sealed for the moment. In between the two entries, Jacob continued by writing only BCD boldly then trailing another arrow back up to “A Bottle.”  Coming full circle, Jacob had then underlined each letter of the title.
            The final page was the most telling as Jacob headlined with the English alphabet arranged from A to Z, beside each letter, a numerical value 1 through 26. Below it, the numbers were transcribed to each letter of A Bottle, 1 … 2 … 15 … 20 … 20 … 12 … 5. Elias saw the direction that Jacob was heading, a numerical code to open the vault, but how to bridge the gap between five levers and seven numbers still eluded him.
            Then it struck him: the numbers and the letters … BCD, Binary Coded Decimal! Lord William, it seems, had tossed academia a bone. BCD was a common coding system effectively using 1’s and 0’s to convey numerical values. Each switch position from left to right represented numbers of an infinite series, 1 … 2 … 4 … 8 … 16. Either in combination or singly, 1 through 31 could be displayed with each set of five, more than sufficient to portray the alphabet.
            Immediately, Elias made a call to the manor, then anxiously awaited a response. Lord William seemed ecstatic over this bid for the first attempt at access in his lifetime. He posed the age-old question. Elias responded calmly, “There’s a message in A Bottle.” Lord William shuddered, speaking softly he asked, “When can I expect you?”
            Elias arrived with nothing more than a handwritten notepad. The lord himself greeted the stoic cryptographer, then led him down to the coveted prize. Along the way, William engaged the determined Elias, offering condolences for the consortium’s loss. He revealed that he’d begun to lose hope that the riddle would ever be solved, voicing concerns that academia might demand the answer to this Gordian knot or threaten Alexander’s remedy should he refuse. He said, “How like modern man to prefer extracting Excalibur with hammer and chisel over merit.”
            In moments they were standing before the epic device in all its mechanical glory. It was a wonder of cast iron and steel, framed in massive oak timbers. Gears and linkage protruded from the Gothic façade, all polished with oil and great care.
            “Before you begin … ” William asked, “may I inquire as to your plans for this bounty?” Elias smiled. “Of course, Sir William, but you know the answer. The consortium promised full disclosure to the world as was likely your founder’s intention.”
            William choked, “Well said, young man … well said.”  Before turning resolutely to the panel, Elias added for the Lord’s benefit, “Sir William … Mr. Delaney sends his regards!”
            As each set of five was completed, the machine fed back confirmation by resetting the panel for the next course. Gears spun and linkage rattled as Elias and the world came closer to wisdom with every entry. The 1’s were up and the 0’s down as the ancient data stream flowed through the workings.
            The Honorable Sir William began to weep as the dream pressed hard against the cold metal door, ready for release. Whether the nations could withstand this sudden renaissance, he could not say, but regardless of how well it was received, The message in A Bottle brought life!

19 comments:

  1. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettt!!

    'Dula's got a blog. Or should I say Scott Livington?

    Very cool man, very cool look. I will definently read the shit out of this piece.

    I got it on number four of my reading list. right next to willy, some guy you don't know called ed, and pheonix's new work.

    I love the map. I think the name and the map clash eachother at the moment. but if you like it, I'll like it.

    I'll get to this tonight or tomorrow night. I'm very excited about it, any excuse to spend less time on the beat. Blog's are the future brother! right up there with MySpace.com and the AOL/Time Warner merger! I'm very modern!!!

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    1. and ofcourse, you have my permission to help promote my blog. wicked cool of you, #WriterNation !!!

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    2. Excellent! I'll be linking it in a minute. As far as the wallpaper (I guess that's what it's called)...I agree. If I can customize my own pics, I will. I might try another style template.
      Talk at you soon.

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    3. putting you're own pics in isn't hard, but getting the right size is, unless you tile it.

      I know you have to write in the http:// code, but I don't know how to do that.

      Wordpress is easier, you just have to find a picture that's 1800X1600. but blogger is all about writing the code. someday I'll have to learn to do that.

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  2. This is very interesting.

    I was worried that the only dialogue would be between Jacob and Elias in the ICU. But my fears were quelled when I encountered the conversation between Sir William and Elias.

    In my opinion dialogue is what brings characters to life.

    I can't wait to see what happens next. It ended at the perfect point.

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  3. Jaja,
    I hear what you're saying though I'd have to add another equally imperative factor into the equation, behavior.

    I believe the rules of fiction are no different than those in the real world. Determinations of true substance require a fusion of the two as well as a mighty good measure of rational discernment from the observer.

    If the writer can effectively convey actions or deeply assess the character's thoughts and sensory reflections,spoken words can often be unecessary.
    Thanks Again for giving me a read, this #WriterNation thing might just work out!

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  4. LIKE THE NEW LOOK MAN. VERY COOL.

    HEY sCOTT, HERE'S WHAT I DO TO REVIEW BLOG WORK, ALL MY COMMENTS ARE IN ALL CAPS. HOPE THAT YOU CAN TELL THE DIFFERENCE, IT'S HARDER THAN REVIEWING STUFF ON FORUMS. ALSO HOPE THAT YOU KNOW THAT EVEN THOUGH i'M WRITING IN ALL CAPS, I'M NOT JUST CONSTANTLY YELLING AT YOU.

    I'M GONNA BE HONEST MAN, I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS PIECE. THERE'S NO ENDING, WHAT'S INSIDE THE GIANT MURDER MACHINE? ( I'M ASSUMING IT'S A MURDER MACHINE )

    I DON'T GET THE MESSAGE IN THE BOTTLE THING, I GET THAT IF YOU GO OUT AND LIVE LIFE, THAT'S ITS OWN REWARD. BUT I DON'T GET HOW IT RELATES TO THIS ...

    ANYHOOZLE, HERE IS THE REVIEW ...

    Elias raced through the streets, determined to arrive at the ICU to speak to with his aged mentor one last time. The pair was part of a decades-old consortium dedicated solely to the resolution of the greatest puzzle made by human hands.
    ICU? THAT DOESN'T SOUND GOOD.

    IRRITABLE COLON UNFIXABLE?

    IRATE COMMUNIST from URANUS?

    INSANE CLOWNS URINATING?

    AND THE GREATEST PUZZLE BY HUMAN HANDS? SOUNDS INTERESTING, LET'S READ ON ...

    The Kensington Vault had been known through the ages as a contraption of unparalleled mechanical mastery. Buried deep below the blue-blooded estate was what promised to be the very essence of infinite knowledge. Rumor had it that the original patriarch had discovered endless tomes hidden beneath an Egyptian temple while serving in the crusades. He realized the forgotten cache was none other than the treasure of the library in nearby Alexandria. Quietly spiriting the find back to England, he constructed this marvel to house its wonders.

    NAH, IT'S GOT ALL HIS PORN IN THERE, I GUARANTEE YOU, WALL TO WALL PORN ...


    Prospering greatly in all manner of human endeavors, the Kensingtons maintained only one stipulation be passed on to the next generation, every man must have access to these riches as long as he rightly answers but one question: “Do you know the way to enter?”
    Dutifully passed on through only the heirs, just one answer would suffice. As reward for their diligently maintaining the repository, they were given free admittance, their success a testament to its enormous value. Throughout the centuries, only three besides family had ever conquered the riddle, and none of them applied it correctly to open the cryptic locks. For but five small levers were what separated any man from sharing what was traditionally reserved to only the direct Kensington line. These were what separated belief from knowing, for many men knew the words of truth but not the essence of what they meant.

    I DON'T UNDERSTAND THAT, THE WORDS OF TRUTH BUT NOT WHAT THEY MEANT?

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  5. Elias burst through the doors, then rushed to join Jacob at his bedside. He had suffered a stroke of both good and bad fortune, the latter in the form of a blood clot in the brain. In his office, an epiphany came as he rifled through his papers, and the resultant excitement threatened to rob him of his just reward. Barely able to speak, he removed the tethered mask and pulled Elias closer still.
    Tears welled in both of their eyes but Jacob had to speak, for he felt death at the very door. “A … Bottle,” he gasped. “… message … in … A Bottle.” He stared back at his young protégé, desperately hoping for some sign of recognition. There was none, only concern for his aged friend’s well-being. Jacob’s face became a twisted grimace as his life began to recede. With but one breath left within him, he chose his last word wisely, saying only “Delaney...” then he died.

    I LIKE THE "THEN HE DIED" LINE. BUT I WOULD HAVE DONE IT IN IT'S OWN PARAGRAPH FOR THE SAKE OF DRAMA AND PRODUCTION. THAT MAKE SENSE?


    In his youth, Jacob had been privileged to be at the forefront of cryptanalysis as one of the legendary Boys from Bletchley Park. It had been their sole task to crack the code of Hitler’s Enigma machine and all of its possible permutations. Praised by Churchill and lauded by history, Jacob’s future was assured as his post-war assignment turned from the battle with fascism to the struggle for enlightenment.

    HITLER HAD AN ENIGMA MACHINE? WHAT'S AN ENIGMA MACHINE? GONNA HAVE TO GOOGLE THIS ...

    I'M BACK! THANK GOD FOR GOOGLE IMAGES.



    In an unexpected twist, the contents surpassed his hopes; the bottle was full of fresh water! The obvious moral was that when seeking to know … the gift of life was the reward.

    WAIT, WHAT? THAT MAKES NO SENSE, THERE COULD HAVE BEEN ANYTHING IN THAT BOTTLE.




    In moments they were standing before the epic device in all its mechanical glory. It was a wonder of cast iron and steel, framed in massive oak timbers. Gears and linkage protruded from the Gothic façade, all polished with oil and great care.

    NOTHING GOOD EVER CAME FROM SOMETHING LIKE THAT. I'M HALF EXPECTING PINHEAD TO COME OUT OF THERE.
    “Before you begin … ” William asked, “may I inquire as to your plans for this bounty?” Elias smiled. “Of course, Sir William, but you know the answer. The consortium promised full disclosure to the world as was likely your founder’s intention.”

    WRONG, NOW HE'S GONNA KILL YOU. CAN'T BELIEVE YOU CAME HERE BY YOURSELF.

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  6. BROKE THE REVIEW IN HALF. APARENTLY THERE'S A 4000 CHARACTER LIMIT. GOOD THING i COPIED AND PASTED THE WHOLE REVIEW.

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    1. BTW, check out the new #WriterNation page and see if you like it. I don't know if you want me to use you're real name or not.

      http://talesoftheawesomeverse.blogspot.com/p/blog-page.html

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  7. Rooster,
    I really don't get how you missed this.

    The vault clearly houses the "treasure of the library in nearby Alexandria", vast ancient knowledge...Google it, The famous Library of Alexandria.

    ICU-I hope you were yanking my chain here.

    "These were what separated belief from knowing, for many men knew the words of truth but not the essence of what they meant."

    The others knew the words of truth, "There was a message in A Bottle" but not the essence of what they meant, there was a code in the title not the body of the story, ebb and flow, high and low etc.
    I know it's a deep concept but I see this everyday in personal spirituality, lots of people know the Bible for example, but precious few really know what the words mean.
    You might relate by looking at writers that are flawless in SPaG, but haven't a clue when attempting to write a story. They see prose as literary mechanics rather than artistic connection through expression.

    As far as the bottle bringing life, the character in the collection's prose piece sought connection with another in hope and received life giving water. The Vault offered knowledge but Elias had to brave the intellectual waters and think deeply to gain what he sought, the reward of knowing was wisdom and wisdom brings life.

    I used this story to challenge myself in several ways and was successful, though it may not appeal to everyone that reads it.

    Thanks for taking it on and forgive me if you saw my dreadful introduction>
    I'll probably change it several times before settling on something satisfying.
    See you at the "Creek."


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    1. intro was fine. but nothing wrong with changing it up. I think it's time I changed mine at least a bit.

      keeps it fresh.

      I didn't know that was literal, the library of alexandria. I thought that was a rumor about what it could be.

      I am yanking your chain about the ICU, I just like playing the CBS game, where you make up the acroymn. Big craig ferguson fan.

      the riddle itself was really cool. Not something i would have been able to figure out.

      The thing is, and this is completely my opinion, and in no way fact ...

      I never really got the metaphores that don't make sense. For example, an eye for an eye doesn't make everyone blind, it leaves them with one eye ...

      that bothers me that that expression caught on, you know? it doesn't make sense.

      I know it's a way of arguing the point that revenge is bad, but i still think the expression needs to make sense.

      that's what I didn't like about the water bottle, the guy in the story had no way of knowing there would be water in it.

      I don't know man, maybe I'm just too stiff about that kind of stuff.

      can't fault your storytelling ability though. Even if i'm not big on this perticular story.

      It's all good after all, I got Aftertime coming up soon, right? and new episodes of doomsday preppers.

      Life is good right now.

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  8. I really enjoyed this piece. Historial fiction is one of my favs. Message in a bottle... doooope, Once again, I use that word with you because you are an awesome writer. The words and your vocabulary are just perfect. "In moments they were standing before the epic device in all its mechanical glory."

    That's my favorite line!!!!

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  9. Niyah,
    Thanks for saying that, you've got quite a way with words yourself! Reading chap.2 of "the Blovel", I caught a lot of those "detective" slangs that you do so well. I might have to do a little copy/paste and steal some California-isms!

    Hope to see you soon,
    Scott

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  10. Why didn't I ever read this story?

    Definitely one of my favourites because of the excellent language usage - you really pushed yourself with this one. This is a piece you can be most proud of.
    "This rabid impatience is what eventually drove him to acquiesce to the detractor’s demands regarding the inclusion of A Bottle amongst such noble works."
    Wow. 'Rabid impatience' I love that.
    "Elias raced through the streets, determined to arrive at the ICU to speak to with his aged mentor one last time."
    Just take a look at this one again.

    Blessings,
    Judith

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  11. Judith,
    I believe I may have mentioned it in my comments' responses but this was a Writer's Beat Prose contest winner.

    It never saw the fiction section pages but was published in this last Autumn's WB Quarterly. I was given a phrase, "Message in a Bottle" and was tasked with writing a 2k word or less story around that phrase.

    THIS is what spilled out of my brain!

    It became a multiple objectived project to see how well I could express several concepts and styles. If I had more space, I could have amped it up considerably.

    Not sure what you mean regarding reviewing that last sentence. Elias is hurrying to the hospital, (the Intensive Care Unit) to speak to Jacob before the likely inevitability of his death.

    Would you change the sentence to clarify that sentiment?

    This is important to me as I'm planning on including "Vault" in a short story collection for self-publication soon.

    Always a pleasure seeing you here and I hope to bring more to the Pillow as soon as possible.

    Till next time,
    Scott



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  12. "Elias raced through the streets, determined to arrive at the ICU TO speak TO WITH his aged mentor one last time."
    No, really. Read it.

    Congratulations on the WB contest win, I'll download the issue. That's wonderful!

    Best wishes with the self-publishing project. Do keep me up to date about what's happening.


    Blessings,
    Judith

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  13. Judith,
    Ya got me on that one! I think I missed that hiccup when I was in edit mode. Then I probably assumed that I'd caught everything.

    Good Call ...thanks!
    Scott

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